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Hello everybody this week I have been working on my buggy and at the moment I think going quite well.
I hope you enjoy going through this slideshow
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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i love your planet you made grace i also love the buggy! also why does the buggy need a restroom a bedroom and a kitchen are people living there? Anyways keep up the good work!
ReplyDeletehi grace !!!! its me Che;sea!! love love love how you made your planet to be hot and i like what your buggy can do and i like how you are so creative.
ReplyDeleteBy Chelsea
Hi Grace, I like how you added extra detail about your buggy's wheels. (I hope they don't melt). Very creative planet and buggy.
ReplyDeleteMiss Ferguson
Thank you so much Miss Ferguson!
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